Script Development - Opening Draft

Here is the opening scenes to our film that I've been working on. This is an idea I've had of how Jack can encounter Emma for the first time and how he purchases the remote and shows his using it on Emma for the first time. I see it requiring a variety of shots in various locations, and in particular a fast past section of "flashback" style shots and match on action jump cuts. As a group we will now look my start to the script, make notes and amendments, incorporate all our ideas together where possible and and develop the next series of events. We could use an extract to see if our target audience would be interested to see the film pan out which would give us some ideas of where to go next.

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